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26 Re: Review Thread on Thu Aug 11, 2011 4:25 am

I love the way you write Jedi~Chick, it makes me feel like I am reading a published novel. so, great addition ! Smile


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27 Re: Review Thread on Thu Aug 11, 2011 5:51 am

Aww, thank you Jaina!!! Very Happy *hugs*

Grievous and Jango Nova: Thanks! I really want to get those books. Smile I have friends who've read them and said they're REALLY good, so I hope to read them soon!!!! Very Happy I'd love to read them. Wink


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28 Re: Review Thread on Thu Aug 11, 2011 6:20 am

Um, ahem, just for the record, although they are a great read, you may want to know two things so you don't get the wrong impression about them-1. only the first one is actually about clone commandos doing what they do best-blowing stuff up while being sneaky. The rest is all about their trainer who gets them to quit and retire. 2. They don't have much impact on the SW universe as a whole, exept for the first one where their was a mission that might decide the outcome of the Clone Wars instead of go "Ooo, here's a great way to quit being a clone!" I just felt I kinda oversold it a little bit as I reread my post just now, LOL.



BTW, great new chapter, and I hope I don't pressure you into adding this if it isn't already there, but I REALLY hope you added the ruins of the old Jedi Enclave on Dantooine while Shadow and Mari are there. I've always been fascinated by that place, LOL. Don't start rewriting your story to fit that in though, LOL, I'm just being overly hopeful Razz


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29 Re: Review Thread on Thu Aug 11, 2011 6:52 am

LOL! My one friend is in LOVE with the series. She liked all the commandos. Wink Sounds interesting still. I might just check them out from the library instead of buying them. Razz

LOL! Thanks! Wink
Dantooine is important. XD I can't remember actually if I bring it up or not....I too am fascinated by that place! I think I either mention it or something.....OH WAIT! I'm saving it. XDDD That's right! Razz LOL! In the sequel, Mari helps Luke in the whole Jedi Training thing, and I'm saving the Enclave for that. And it may be very non-canon, but I will be messing with the OT a bit in the sequel. Razz LOL! It's in the writing process now, less of the planning. XD Thanks a bunch Grievous! Wink I may ad in the Enclave just for you though. Haha!


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30 Re: Review Thread on Thu Aug 11, 2011 8:38 am

Jedi~Chick wrote:LOL! My one friend is in LOVE with the series. She liked all the commandos. Wink Sounds interesting still. I might just check them out from the library instead of buying them. Razz

LOL! Thanks! Wink
Dantooine is important. XD I can't remember actually if I bring it up or not....I too am fascinated by that place! I think I either mention it or something.....OH WAIT! I'm saving it. XDDD That's right! Razz LOL! In the sequel, Mari helps Luke in the whole Jedi Training thing, and I'm saving the Enclave for that. And it may be very non-canon, but I will be messing with the OT a bit in the sequel. Razz LOL! It's in the writing process now, less of the planning. XD Thanks a bunch Grievous! Wink I may ad in the Enclave just for you though. Haha!
Sweet! After playing the KOTOR games, I fell in love with the place, especially after you got to explore its ruins in the second game and you saw Kreia reveal herself as Darth traya there and kill all the Jedi Masters. (Take that Vrook, I never liked you anyway, you were too mean to be a Jedi Razz ) LOL, BEST SCENE EVER!


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31 Re: Review Thread on Thu Aug 11, 2011 9:41 am

LOL Awesome!!!!!!!! Very Happy 'I've read up a bit on KOTOR, but I have absolutely NO gaming systems (except a DS) so I can't play them. Razz haha, they sound totally freaking awesome though!!!!!!!!!! Very Happy XD


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32 Re: Review Thread on Thu Aug 11, 2011 8:09 pm

Well, the gameplays not that good considering it's alkl turn-based, and they're (especially the second one ) LOADED with glitches that are both annoying and sometimes gameplay stopping if you're trying to help someone out but they're not there like they should be, so I wouldn't get too hyped up about it. BUT, they have the best storylines ever, and that's the main reason I play them. Especially the second game, it had the most twists and turns depending on your choices, it was AMAZING!


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33 Re: Review Thread on Thu Aug 11, 2011 8:29 pm

Um, ahem, just for the record, although they are a great read, you may want to know two things so you don't get the wrong impression about them-1. only the first one is actually about clone commandos doing what they do best-blowing stuff up while being sneaky. The rest is all about their trainer who gets them to quit and retire. 2. They don't have much impact on the SW universe as a whole, exept for the first one where their was a mission that might decide the outcome of the Clone Wars instead of go "Ooo, here's a great way to quit being a clone!" I just felt I kinda oversold it a little bit as I reread my post just now, LOL.


Technically its the first 3 are the missions, its when Order 66 comes down the line that they decided to desert Wink

Havn't had the time to read this next chapter but as soon as i do ill let you know what i think of it Wink


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34 Re: Review Thread on Thu Aug 11, 2011 8:44 pm

But didn't they start thinking/planning of quitting in Triple Zero? And didn't the books focus more on Kal than Omega Squad? Yeah, we still saw missions, but the books we're no longer ABOUT the missions.


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35 Re: Review Thread on Thu Aug 11, 2011 8:48 pm

Still, it all sounds good Grievous! Wink Do they have KOTOR books? Wink
I've got the Force Unleashed game for my DS, but that's pretty much it. xDDD
Smile Sounds interesting!


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36 Re: Review Thread on Thu Aug 11, 2011 8:51 pm

I think they have KOTOR comic book series, but no official novelization. It would probably take up too many pages, those games are LONG


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37 Re: Review Thread on Fri Aug 12, 2011 12:41 am

Ah, I see. Smile That's still cool. I'm getting into Comics now. xD


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38 Re: Review Thread on Fri Aug 12, 2011 1:08 am

But didn't they start thinking/planning of quitting in Triple Zero? And didn't the books focus more on Kal than Omega Squad? Yeah, we still saw missions, but the books we're no longer ABOUT the missions.


Nope. Up until Order 66 they were about the missions primarily. Kal was always a secondary character in them Wink

Alright so i had the time to read this new addition and i liked it. Smile No idea how shes going to get off Dantooine if at all cause its sorta mostly abandoned lol cant wait for the next chapter


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39 Re: Review Thread on Fri Aug 12, 2011 4:17 am

Jedi~Chick wrote:Ah, I see. Smile That's still cool. I'm getting into Comics now. xD
I've yet to get used to comic books, I find them dull compared to a good book, IDK why.

Jango Nova wrote:
But didn't they start thinking/planning of quitting in Triple Zero? And didn't the books focus more on Kal than Omega Squad? Yeah, we still saw missions, but the books we're no longer ABOUT the missions.


Nope. Up until Order 66 they were about the missions primarily. Kal was always a secondary character in them Wink

Alright so i had the time to read this new addition and i liked it. Smile No idea how shes going to get off Dantooine if at all cause its sorta mostly abandoned lol cant wait for the next chapter
I've read the books myself, and I can't see how you say that.



Hard Contact-the entire book covers one mission, and the clones thoughts are at the here and now



Triple Zero-they're on a mission, yes, but Kal gets into the picture, HEADS the mission, and gets the clones all whiny about they're lives. The mission and the clones personal matters take up equal amount of the book.



True Colors, there's a mission still yes, but it only takes up the first half of the book, and THAT gets cut in half by Kal's personal mission to find Ko Sai. And by this point in the series, the clones are practically already deserting the army, not defending it. If it weren't for Kal telling them to be patient and wait for the right time so he could stock up on stuff, the series and their jobs would've been over.



In my opinion, the series considerably downgraded from it's original book. They were still good, but the entire series shouldve been renamed at least instead of leading you to believe you'd get a novelized version of the Republic Commando game. They could've at least called it "Republic Deserters" before letting you figure that out for yourself.


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40 Re: Review Thread on Fri Aug 12, 2011 4:27 am

Thanks Jango! Smile
LOL, I pretty much just made up EVERYTHING in the Dantooine thing. XDD I made up a town, and townspeople, and they're way of getting off the planet. LOL!


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41 Re: Review Thread on Fri Aug 12, 2011 4:36 am

Heh, as long as the townspeople aren't too civilized and live in a kinda village-like town, then it sticks with canon. Oh, and there should be a farmer or two. Just add the sentence "Mari saw several large farms spread throughout the landscape" somewhere randomly in your story and you'll be fine. LOL


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42 Re: Review Thread on Fri Aug 12, 2011 5:51 am

LOL!! Well, one of the character that comes in on teh next chapter is a farmer....and the town is pretty much made up of farmers. XDDD SO YAY IT WORKS! LOL!


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43 Re: Review Thread on Fri Aug 12, 2011 9:47 am

Ha, you're so in sync with SW that you're stuck with canon without you knowing it, LOL.


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44 Re: Review Thread on Fri Aug 12, 2011 8:48 pm

XDDDDD I'm just awesome like that apparently. Wink LOL!! xDDD
Well, that definitely works to my benefit. Razz

I'm working on the sequel now, and it's no longer canon though. XDDDDD For what I want to happen to happen, it needs to be non-canon. Razz At least non-canon to the books. xD


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45 Re: Review Thread on Fri Aug 12, 2011 9:09 pm

LOL, may be you should forget about the canon and let that awesomeness of yours make it canon for you.Razz


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46 Re: Review Thread on Fri Aug 12, 2011 9:52 pm

LOL!! The first one probably isn't really /officially/ canon anyway. XD SO YAY FOR MY AWESOMENESS!!!!!
I'll post chapter 4 (?) is that what we're on? xDD Now. Wink


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47 Re: Review Thread on Sat Aug 13, 2011 1:15 am

Ooo, good chapter, very suspenseful. Just a question, DO we see some of Dantooine's native creatures/predators? You mentioned it more than once, so you've gotten me curious.


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48 Re: Review Thread on Sat Aug 13, 2011 2:37 am

Thank you!! Smile

I think I mention indirectly the creatures, or something close, but I don't think that there is any definite clash between any native creatures and the characters. Razz

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49 Re: Review Thread on Sat Aug 13, 2011 5:53 am

Ok, I was just wondering, looking foward to more.


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50 Re: Review Thread on Wed Aug 17, 2011 7:25 am

Awww, I liked how Mari met her mom. Strangely, I figured that was her in the previous chapter, perhaps because of the use of her mom in the prologue/expecting a bigger picture with her in it.


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