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1 Review Thread on Thu Mar 10, 2011 6:42 am

Please discuss all of Jango Nova's fan-fics here, NOT on his story threads.


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2 Re: Review Thread on Fri Mar 11, 2011 9:58 am

Got the first chapter up. Very Happy Im in the process now of reading up to chapter 4 ( i already have them written but its been a while :p ) So ill get those up soon Smile


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3 Re: Review Thread on Fri Mar 11, 2011 10:18 am

Wow, great beginning-it had a lot of suspense, action, and backstory. Very Happy


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4 Re: Review Thread on Fri Mar 11, 2011 11:09 pm

General Grievous wrote:Wow, great beginning-it had a lot of suspense, action, and backstory. Very Happy

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5 Re: Review Thread on Mon Mar 14, 2011 7:00 am

Wow, I liked this chapter a lot too. It had that dark moment when Jango semi-randomly killed that Weequay, and you seem to know your Mando'a quite well.....


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6 Re: Review Thread on Mon Mar 14, 2011 7:37 am

Vore' ner'vod Wink Im sort of a Mando geek lol Very Happy And the Weequay was sort of a random kill. I was going off of KOTOR where they had guards on certain bars in the Lower city and you had to pay to access them. So i brought that them to Coruscant for dramatic flair lol. Also shows that Jango will do almost anything to get this certain Jedi Very Happy


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7 Re: Review Thread on Tue Mar 15, 2011 9:08 am

Ooo! You're a KOTOR fan too! I LOVE that game, and it's sequel! Anyway, I see what you mean though about both being the mando geek and the Weequay's demise.... Wink


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8 Re: Review Thread on Sun Mar 20, 2011 6:00 am

Good chapter and action, though it definitely messed with the Universe considering Magnaguards weren't around at this time and orange lightsabers were too rare for most Jedi to have...


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9 Re: Review Thread on Sun Mar 20, 2011 7:01 am

Just because you dont see them around doesn't mean they arnt there Razz Pirates after the vong war are still using Droidikas. That and i just like the Magnaguards lol. As for the orange Lightsaber i was going for rare as well. Jango still uses a lot of Clone Wars tech cause i have his father as an ARC Trooper who deserted after order 66.

Edit: Oh just found this on WookiePedia on the MagnaGuard section Very Happy

Post-Clone Wars
Following the massacre of the Separatist Council by Darth Vader, under Darth Sidious's orders, all IG-100 MagnaGuards were deactivated. However, the Geonosian Gizor Dellso would later use IG-100 MagnaGuards as infantry in his personal army.[2] At least a decade later, two MagnaGuards were reactivated by the Galactic Empire for use as N-K Necrosis's bodyguards, and redesignated as NK-3s.[3] The bureaucrat Narp Pilyev owned two MagnaGuards and used them as security guards, to protect his apartment on Coruscant.[19] Aside from these examples, other persons of note occasionally employed them as guards and henchmen

Jango would probably fall into the last part there Wink


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10 Re: Review Thread on Mon Mar 21, 2011 12:29 am

Jango Nova wrote:Just because you dont see them around doesn't mean they arnt there Razz Pirates after the vong war are still using Droidikas. That and i just like the Magnaguards lol. As for the orange Lightsaber i was going for rare as well. Jango still uses a lot of Clone Wars tech cause i have his father as an ARC Trooper who deserted after order 66.

Edit: Oh just found this on WookiePedia on the MagnaGuard section Very Happy

Post-Clone Wars
Following the massacre of the Separatist Council by Darth Vader, under Darth Sidious's orders, all IG-100 MagnaGuards were deactivated. However, the Geonosian Gizor Dellso would later use IG-100 MagnaGuards as infantry in his personal army.[2] At least a decade later, two MagnaGuards were reactivated by the Galactic Empire for use as N-K Necrosis's bodyguards, and redesignated as NK-3s.[3] The bureaucrat Narp Pilyev owned two MagnaGuards and used them as security guards, to protect his apartment on Coruscant.[19] Aside from these examples, other persons of note occasionally employed them as guards and henchmen

Jango would probably fall into the last part there Wink
Wait a second, maybe I'm getting confused here-is this story before or AFTER the Clone Wars, like a "what would've happened had Jango's head not flown off of his body" type story?


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11 Re: Review Thread on Mon Mar 21, 2011 2:37 am

No. This around 16 aby. so its during the time where the Moffs are warring against each other and the New Republic. Sorry if i confused you lol


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12 Re: Review Thread on Mon Mar 21, 2011 2:41 am

Oh, I get now, and this person isn't Jango Fett, but a NEW character who's first name's Jango right?


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13 Re: Review Thread on Mon Mar 21, 2011 2:51 am

Yes, Jango Nova Wink Part of his backstory


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14 Re: Review Thread on Mon Mar 21, 2011 2:52 am

Oh, tehe, THAT makes this story a lot easier to understand!


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15 Re: Review Thread on Mon Mar 21, 2011 3:04 am

Lol sorry if i didn't make that clear.


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16 Re: Review Thread on Tue Mar 22, 2011 7:51 am

Well, part of it was because I didn't catch the 16 ABY at the very beginning, though if you put in his last name somewhere in the beginning, it would help too for other readers.


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17 Re: Review Thread on Tue Mar 22, 2011 11:10 pm

General Grievous wrote:Well, part of it was because I didn't catch the 16 ABY at the very beginning, though if you put in his last name somewhere in the beginning, it would help too for other readers.

Well it is called Jango Nova- The Hunt Begins Rolling Eyes Wink


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18 Re: Review Thread on Thu Mar 24, 2011 9:11 am

Oh, I thought the Jango Nova was there because you're the author and all. Tehe, the education system here's failing me. Razz


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19 Re: Review Thread on Thu Mar 24, 2011 10:13 am

General Grievous wrote:Oh, I thought the Jango Nova was there because you're the author and all. Tehe, the education system here's failing me. Razz


Lol no problem vod. Working on Chapter 4 and should have it up soon. Going to be more character building and less action for a couple of chapters.


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20 Re: Review Thread on Sat Mar 26, 2011 5:34 am

Ah that's ok, it was still a good chapter. I mean, it would be pointless if it were NOTHING but action. It needs a little storyline built in to it here and there, like you're obviously doing. Very Happy


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21 Re: Review Thread on Tue Apr 05, 2011 7:45 am

Hmmm, I'm beginning to wonder who I like more-Goran or Jango........


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22 Re: Review Thread on Tue Apr 05, 2011 10:22 pm

General Grievous wrote:Hmmm, I'm beginning to wonder who I like more-Goran or Jango........

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23 Re: Review Thread on Mon Apr 18, 2011 8:04 am

As they say-Short and Sweet, Jango!


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24 Re: Review Thread on Mon Apr 18, 2011 10:26 pm

Thanks =) It was sorta fun writing Alia character. Im going to enjoy building the relation between her and Goran.


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25 Re: Review Thread on Tue Apr 19, 2011 4:30 am

Yes, I can imagine. New characters are always fun to build a story around! Smile


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