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176 Re: Review Thread on Wed Jul 20, 2011 4:49 pm

well anyway, loved it, a great story, cant wait for the next, wonderful ending and good character development throughout the story, great work

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177 Re: Review Thread on Tue Aug 09, 2011 9:13 am

ok heres the news



im going to post my long one-shot soon the bridges that gao between time cannot erase and secrets of a broken heart. HOWEVER after that there will be a story called "Where Loyalties Lie" promo:



With the secret out Anakin spends more time wiht padme then ever and ahsoka is left with a lot of time on her hands. when she starts playing "Light Ball" at the temple she and a group of younglings join a rec league on their way to become champions. When Palpatine wishs for Anakin to support him in developing the facility into a armor factory, will Anakin stay loyal to his padawan, or fall victum to the Chancelor?



sad news if the story Secrets of a Broken Heart will not happen until after my series is done(if you guys decide you still want me to write it by then) and it will not play into my series



instead here is the story that will take its place called, "The Potential of a Stranger" promo:



Anakin, Ahsoka, and Obi-wan stumble across a 15 year old girl caught up in bizzare circumstances. Something about her makes the council want to find out more about her. When their paths keep crossing unexpectedly, the gang starts to think that there is more to this girl than meets the eye. Now, it's up to Anakin, Ahsoka, and Obi-wan to find out who this girl is , why she intrigues the Jedi Council and why she seems to belong with them?

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178 Re: Review Thread on Tue Aug 09, 2011 9:47 am

Hmm, I don't see any problem with it. It also takes a bit of an edge off of having to read the first book for those who are new and will only be able to read the entire thing later.


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179 Re: Review Thread on Wed Aug 10, 2011 2:31 am

aww. I was really lookin foward to secret of a broken heart. Sad Sad Sad Sad


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180 Re: Review Thread on Thu Aug 11, 2011 7:12 pm

aw well, looking foward to these stories, they look great

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181 Re: Review Thread on Sun Sep 18, 2011 2:56 am

To be perfectly honest, there were several factual errors in the new story that kind of irked me, BUT the overall storyline was good. It was a good short story to read on free time, and I can see how this would be followed up by the next actual novel or book in your series. I look foward to more!


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182 Re: Review Thread on Mon Sep 19, 2011 2:59 am

I agree with Grievous. Smile It was a pretty good storyline, but there were a LOT of factual and canon errors. It was a great story though, I read the whole thing!!! I felt bad for Ahsoka. Razz there were a few grammar and spelling errors as well, but those are all easily fixed. Wink


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183 Re: Review Thread on Mon Dec 05, 2011 3:28 pm

so when do you think we might see a new story ahsokasister? take your time, a good story is worth all the wait.

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184 Re: Review Thread on Sun Jan 15, 2012 9:48 pm

Hey ARC, I noticed that you posted your review on the story thread. If you wouldn't mind, could you post it on here please, it helps keep the story threads clean.


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185 Re: Review Thread on Mon Jan 16, 2012 12:26 am

General Grievous wrote:Hey ARC, I noticed that you posted your review on the story thread. If you wouldn't mind, could you post it on here please, it helps keep the story threads clean.
Oh,sorry for the mistake.

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186 Re: Review Thread on Mon Jan 16, 2012 11:22 pm

Oh, it's ok ARC, no problem whatsoever. The fan-fic section can get confusing sometimes after all.


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