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151 Re: Review Thread on Tue Mar 08, 2011 3:49 am

Ok i wanted to apologize for not updating sooner but the next update should be today and in the next story called Hard Ball it will not be a recording studio or a pool it will be a star wars soccer field (inside artificial grass ect ect)
PS there r only 3 more chapters after the one ill post today so ALMOST DONE

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152 Re: Review Thread on Tue Mar 08, 2011 7:07 am

Cool new chapter, Ahsokasister!! yodasmile


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153 Re: Review Thread on Tue Mar 08, 2011 7:14 am

Wow, I liked this chapter a lot, probably cause of the action. *smiles sheepishly* Razz LOL, though seriously, good chapter.


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154 Re: Review Thread on Mon Apr 04, 2011 7:00 pm

hey, ahsoka, do you know when your next update will be, im looking foward to it = D

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155 Re: Review Thread on Mon Apr 04, 2011 11:24 pm

WOW!You seem very creative Ahsokasister.

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156 Re: Review Thread on Sun Apr 17, 2011 8:30 pm

aw thanx for sticking with my story guys two chaptera are now up

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157 Re: Review Thread on Mon Apr 18, 2011 12:24 am

Love the two new chapters, Ahsokasister!!!!! yodagrin


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158 Re: Review Thread on Mon Apr 18, 2011 8:06 am

Awwwwwww. Sad, but very well written. Very Happy


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159 Re: Review Thread on Tue Apr 19, 2011 8:38 am

ah yet another touching couple of chapters. once again great work as always. I honestly hope that when you finish you will go on and do the others becuase I have really enjoyed this story cant wait for the final chapters.

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160 Re: Review Thread on Tue Apr 19, 2011 8:23 pm

so, this book would be fairly big. Just curious about how and when you will wrap this up and start your second book in the series?


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161 Re: Review Thread on Wed Apr 20, 2011 5:11 am

after four..ish more chapters i will start the next one under that tittle (Secrets of A Broken Heart)

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162 Re: Review Thread on Wed Apr 20, 2011 7:45 am

alright. well I hope you don't do a cliff hanger at the end of this one. I would hate to have to wait Wink


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163 Re: Review Thread on Thu Apr 21, 2011 5:41 am

dont worry i wont

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164 Re: Review Thread on Tue Apr 26, 2011 12:49 am

I love your new chapters Ahsokasister!

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165 Re: Review Thread on Tue May 17, 2011 3:58 am

Hmm, you said that there was more to go, but I personally thought that this chapter would be a great ending for this story.


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166 Re: Review Thread on Tue May 17, 2011 6:39 am

i agree but there is a twist coming up... du..du...DUUUUU

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167 Re: Review Thread on Tue May 17, 2011 8:16 pm

Great chapter, can't believe Ahsokatook the crown. I thought that in the end, she might shy away but you did justice to her character to make her stick there and take the crown like a jedi.

If any of that made sense, well, great chapter anyway.


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168 Re: Review Thread on Wed May 18, 2011 1:15 am

Great chapter, Ahsokasister! Very Happy


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169 Re: Review Thread on Tue May 31, 2011 6:07 am

Ah, I figured that she'd return to the Jedi at the end.


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170 Re: Review Thread on Wed Jun 01, 2011 8:20 am

Great chapter soka, and the crown looked great. I can't wait for you to tart your next book.


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171 Re: Review Thread on Thu Jun 02, 2011 12:43 pm

ha ha, wow that was a awsome fan fic, if thats the ending than that was great, honestly loved the whole thing, of course I can not wait until secrets of a broken heart (Although I suppose you will be taking a break now lol) and I'm sure it will be the same level of great writing, thanks for a great story and I hope for more.

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172 Re: Review Thread on Fri Jun 03, 2011 12:02 am

no no 2 chapters left and no break

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173 Re: Review Thread on Fri Jun 03, 2011 12:38 pm

oh thats good lol, Im really looking foward to it ha ha, and the fact that there will be no break just sweetens the deal, however everything i said before still stands, good story.

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174 Re: Review Thread on Tue Jul 19, 2011 7:59 am

Wow, great ending, especially with it's twist of who ruled the kingdom. Well done.


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175 Re: Review Thread on Tue Jul 19, 2011 10:04 am

I loved the end where the grandmothers voice is heard saying your mother and I are so proud, it makes me think she has matured in the force to start actually hearing the voices of loved one long gone!


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