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1 Re: Review Thread on Tue Jul 27, 2010 2:38 am

Cool! Also very creepy! I feel sorry for the poor guy! Nice work! cherry

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2 Re: Review Thread on Tue Jul 27, 2010 3:04 am

Awesome!a little creepy but AWESOME

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3 Re: Review Thread on Tue Jul 27, 2010 5:46 am

The fact that it's kind of creepy makes it really cool.Very Happy

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4 Re: Review Thread on Tue Jul 27, 2010 10:56 am

Whoa. Very good story! cherry

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5 Re: Review Thread on Tue Jul 27, 2010 8:12 pm

Wow. Very good story indeed.

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6 Re: Review Thread on Wed Jul 28, 2010 2:23 am

All of the characters listed in this story are real. Susejo was indeed some creepy person who somehow had been "connected" to the Sarlacc and did indeed love to tease and torture the Sarlacc's victims. Kithaba was indeed a skiff guard who worked for Jabba. He was indeed knocked off the skiff and pulled into the Sarlacc by its tongue. The insults Boba Fett used against Susejo and the way he escaped are from the short story "A Barve Like That: The Tale of Boba Fett" from "Tales from Jabba's palace".

If you are confused as to why the tentacles opened when Kithaba and Boba Fett insulted Susejo, I will explain what happens. Angering Susejo angers the Sarlacc. When Susejo gets angry, and therefore the Sarlacc, the Sarlacc will open the tentacles grabbing the person who angered them and try to slap them. It is confusing, but I hope I made it make at least a little more sense.

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Susejo
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Kithaba

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7 Re: Review Thread on Thu Jul 29, 2010 11:26 am

Wow, Fantastic story! It's really hard to believe you just made it up as you went along!

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8 Re: Review Thread on Fri Aug 06, 2010 6:08 am

Great story Evanthetoon!

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9 Re: Review Thread on Wed Aug 11, 2010 6:28 am

I think that you should probably write another one. Your a really good writer.

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10 Re: Review Thread on Wed Aug 11, 2010 9:05 pm

I agree if you have time you should definately write another.

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11 Re: Review Thread on Sun Aug 22, 2010 10:44 am

I'm thinking of writing a story about a Jedi who gets killed during Order 66. I need to think of a really cool ending though, like this story (the last sentence almost says more than the entire rest of the story).

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12 Re: Review Thread on Sun Aug 22, 2010 7:58 pm

That sounds like a good idea. BTW, have you read my story so far? Right now I'm trying to get a bunch of reviews to both improve my current story and maybe write a new one.

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13 Re: Review Thread on Mon Aug 23, 2010 12:24 am

I think it would be interesting to hear about Order 66 from the perspective of a Jedi that perished when the Order was issued.

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14 Re: Review Thread on Mon Aug 23, 2010 1:30 am

That's what I had planned. First-person stories that end with the person getting killed are slightly creepy.

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15 Re: Review Thread on Mon Aug 23, 2010 7:13 am

They are, but they are also interesting.

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16 Re: Review Thread on Mon Aug 23, 2010 7:14 am

I agree completely. Creepy stories are always interesting.

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17 Re: Review Thread on Mon Aug 23, 2010 7:46 am

As long as they're not too creepy. Wink Your first story was very creative. I hope your second is just as good! Very Happy

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18 Re: Review Thread on Tue Aug 24, 2010 10:57 am

I can't seem to think of anything interesting for my new story. But I am working on it.

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19 Re: Review Thread on Wed Aug 25, 2010 3:52 am

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I am confused about the first part.

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20 Re: Review Thread on Wed Aug 25, 2010 5:47 am

A slight bit of creepiness is usually good.

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21 Review Thread on Sat Aug 28, 2010 7:44 pm

That's the point: it is supossed to be confusing. Obviously someone who just fell into a Sarlacc would be a little disoriented.

But yes, Kithaba is confused and he is trying to sort out the events leading up to that moment.

"Jabba's Palace, Bounty Hunter, where am I?, etc." are all just thoughts in Kithaba's head.

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22 Re: Review Thread on Fri Sep 17, 2010 4:37 am

Wow!!! Great chapter Evan!!!

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23 Re: Review Thread on Fri Sep 17, 2010 6:10 am

Cool!!!

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24 Re: Review Thread on Fri Sep 17, 2010 9:38 am

Ha!!! I liked the end where Boba still has some of Selestrine's hair.

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25 skdhkxhfid on Sun Oct 03, 2010 9:29 pm

Ooo, nice and creepy. What era is this story in? The Empire era?

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