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1 Discussion Thread on Mon Jul 26, 2010 2:22 am

cool!posted mine(well the forward)because well chapter one is so long.plz read an thx!

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2 Re: Discussion Thread on Mon Jul 26, 2010 11:45 pm

Very good job. I like how it's a cliff hanger.

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3 Re: Discussion Thread on Tue Jul 27, 2010 1:03 am

Sounds great. It's cool how you don't really understand what is going on until the last sentence.

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4 Re: Discussion Thread on Tue Jul 27, 2010 2:41 am

Cool cliff hanger! cherry

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5 Re: Discussion Thread on Tue Jul 27, 2010 3:01 am

cool!posted ch.1 2day!hope yall like mine as much as you like his!

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6 Re: Discussion Thread on Tue Jul 27, 2010 8:48 am

Thanks y'all! I wrote this in such a hurry I'll probably redo it. I'm still working on part 2, I've got to warn you this is a huge story and this is the first time it's ever left my head, I've got long backstory's for most of the characters which I'm gonna have to post on the character bio thread. The first chapter basically deals with introducing the characters, getting them all together and them trying to get away from the Empire, which is a hard task in this part of the story. Needless to say the next part will be jumpstarting the story, the 2 main characters are about to make their explosive entrance and their goals will soon be revealed.

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7 Re: Discussion Thread on Tue Jul 27, 2010 9:26 am

Ok, I edited chapter one! One of the things I did was signify that you we're following the same imperial officer, Commander Jock, throughout this chapter. Please read it again and tell me what you think. (and please, I want honest opinions, I don't have a clue what I'm doing so if I make a mistake I want to learn from it.)

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8 Re: Discussion Thread on Tue Jul 27, 2010 1:01 pm

BTW, Does anybody know where I got the names "Jock" and "Vassik" from?

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9 Re: Discussion Thread on Tue Jul 27, 2010 8:18 pm

The improvements you made really gave more detail and really painted a picture in your mind of what was happening. "Vassik" sounds familiar but I'm not sure about "Jock". BTW I'm working on a story if and when I finish could I post it?

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10 Re: Discussion Thread on Wed Jul 28, 2010 12:07 am

You sure can, just go into Fan fiction and click "new topic " and you can post it there!

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11 Re: Discussion Thread on Wed Jul 28, 2010 8:27 pm

Yay!! I still have to put it down on paper and then edit it so it might be a while.

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12 Re: Discussion Thread on Wed Jul 28, 2010 8:38 pm

I posted part 2 if you didn't notice.

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13 Re: Discussion Thread on Thu Jul 29, 2010 2:43 am

Wow this story is getting really interesting.

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14 Re: Discussion Thread on Thu Jul 29, 2010 3:46 am

Are you going to post the next part soon? cherry

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15 Re: Discussion Thread on Thu Jul 29, 2010 4:02 am

As soon as get it done, it may take me a couple of days.
Very Happy

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16 Hartattack on Thu Jul 29, 2010 4:22 am

To tell you the truth, I just made up my story, That Was Short: Kithaba's Tale, as I went along.

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17 Re: Discussion Thread on Thu Jul 29, 2010 6:46 am

Most impressive, considering it took me couple years or so to develop this story. Amazingly I've been able to retain it all in my mind, yet I seem to forget what I did just a minute ago.


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18 Re: Discussion Thread on Sun Aug 01, 2010 10:05 am

I'm still working on part 3, I've had the story developed for quite a while but I've had to make up the dialog as I go along. Needless to say I hope I'll have it ready to post soon.


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19 Re: Discussion Thread on Sun Aug 08, 2010 3:30 am

Ok, I finally made a breakthrough and I'm almost finished with part 3. I hope to have it up later on today!

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20 Re: Discussion Thread on Sun Aug 08, 2010 8:33 am

Really? Cool!

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21 Re: Discussion Thread on Mon Aug 09, 2010 12:59 pm

I just posted part 3!

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22 Re: Discussion Thread on Mon Aug 09, 2010 8:45 pm

Thi story is great!! The Jedi are really cool!!

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23 Re: Discussion Thread on Mon Aug 09, 2010 11:15 pm

COOL!!!! Very Happy

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24 Re: Discussion Thread on Tue Aug 10, 2010 6:19 am

Good story so far Hartattack! DEFINITELY keep on updating it!

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25 Re: Discussion Thread on Sat Aug 14, 2010 11:01 am

Does anybody know where the names "Jock" and "Vassik" come from?

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