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51 Re: Review Thread on Thu Dec 09, 2010 5:09 am

Um, im not entirlly sure were to take "Sons of Tattoonie". All i really have is that scene right there.

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52 Re: Review Thread on Thu Dec 09, 2010 5:13 am

Ha, well, I say that you have Anakin on a mission on Tatooine (explaining how he saved Biggs) and somehow he gets hurt. Then, Biggs helps him, and Anakin saves the day. (again. Razz )

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53 Re: Review Thread on Thu Dec 09, 2010 5:15 am

Might work. Ill give it some thought Grievous. And thanks for repairing my front problem

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54 Re: Review Thread on Thu Dec 09, 2010 5:17 am

Let me finish up "Return to Innocence" and then ill start working on "Sons of Tattooine" winkyoda

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55 Re: Review Thread on Thu Dec 09, 2010 5:22 am

Naka Dormin77 wrote:Might work. Ill give it some thought Grievous. And thanks for repairing my front problem
Ha, no problem! Also, I agree, it's best to just focus on one story at a time. I once tried to write two at once, and I wound up just writing so much of "Assault of the Aggressor" that I could only get a few paragraphs out of the other story. So one at a time is definitely the best thing to do.

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56 Re: Review Thread on Thu Dec 09, 2010 5:31 am

U could also do the scene in "Sons of Tattooine" with a loner cowboy and an innocent farmboy attacked by hostile indians.

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57 Re: Review Thread on Thu Dec 09, 2010 5:33 am

Ha, that's a neat analogy! Oooo! Why don't you rename it "The Tatooine Warrior", replace Anakin with some dude with a bunch of weapons and a western hat! That'd be awesome!!!!!!!!!!! LOL, perhaps I got too excited, it's your story after all. Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy

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58 Re: Review Thread on Thu Dec 09, 2010 5:36 am

Right. U do that Grievous. Its your idea anyway

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59 Re: Review Thread on Thu Dec 09, 2010 5:47 am

Hmm, I might. But first I have to finish Assault of the Aggressor. Like I said, I once tried to write two at once, but it went straight to the Kessel Spice Mines. Razz

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60 Re: Review Thread on Thu Dec 09, 2010 5:51 am

Thats using Sw slang to say it went down hill. Or did it really go straight to the Kessel Mines?

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61 Re: Review Thread on Thu Dec 09, 2010 5:53 am

It's my SW slang for it going down the hill. Wink

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62 Re: Review Thread on Thu Dec 09, 2010 5:55 am

Ok Very Happy

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63 Re: Review Thread on Thu Dec 09, 2010 10:12 pm

I Really like your story. I think doing one on Ahsoka is a good idea. Plus some of the detail you put into it. Very Happy Very Happy

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64 Re: Review Thread on Thu Dec 09, 2010 11:22 pm

Thanks Yoda

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65 Re: Review Thread on Fri Dec 10, 2010 4:05 am

No problem. I was wondering if you are going to do one on Ahsoka right before she came to the temple or on how Plo rescued her?

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66 Re: Review Thread on Fri Dec 10, 2010 5:03 am

I might. The story "Return to Innocence" is ment to show u just how deep Ahsoka's relationship with Plo Koon is. It also shows u what happened proir to her being discover by Plo .

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67 Re: Review Thread on Fri Dec 10, 2010 9:54 pm

I see. Well I hope you keep writing!

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68 Re: Review Thread on Sat Dec 11, 2010 12:48 am

Anakin! Return to Innocence was sooooooo sad! I hate Anakin now! LOL! ARGGH! If I show Winter that she might even start crying! Good job!

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69 Re: Review Thread on Sat Dec 11, 2010 12:49 am

Wait a minute? Were'd the story go?

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70 Re: Review Thread on Sat Dec 11, 2010 12:51 am

What on Earth did I just read and review? It's gone now. I guess you deleted it.

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71 Re: Review Thread on Sat Dec 11, 2010 1:04 am

Weird????

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72 Re: Review Thread on Sat Dec 11, 2010 1:08 am

Yah. I've been having some trouble with the story lately

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73 Re: Review Thread on Sat Dec 11, 2010 1:12 am

Bummer. What happened?

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74 Re: Review Thread on Sat Dec 11, 2010 1:30 am

donno. Benn having some trouble with the front size, it keeps jumping around from big to really small

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75 Re: Review Thread on Sat Dec 11, 2010 4:34 am

Well what I read seemed to disappear! I think it might have been something Greivous did because isn't he the one that messed with it in the first place? I'd ask him about it.

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