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1 Review Thread on Mon Nov 29, 2010 3:49 am

Be sure to mention which fan fic your talking about . . .

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2 Re: Review Thread on Mon Nov 29, 2010 3:53 am

I loved ur story!Good job!

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3 Re: Review Thread on Mon Nov 29, 2010 4:17 am

Urm, how do I put this, we've tried to have reviews and stories be separta before naka, but it's never really worked out. You see, we can't move old reviews to these threads, and it wasn't fair for others who wanted review threads but couldn't have them without erasing their old reviews, which no one wanted. So, I'm going to have to ask if it'll be alright for me to combine this thread with your story's. Can I go ahead?

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4 Re: Review Thread on Mon Nov 29, 2010 4:26 am

OOO! what a dillemia! I guess whey not , if they can't do it whey should I Crying or Very sad

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5 Re: Review Thread on Mon Nov 29, 2010 4:27 am

Ok, I'll combine it right now....

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6 Re: Review Thread on Mon Nov 29, 2010 4:29 am

Ok, I've combined it. Also, great story! Nicely described, and had a cool plot. I liked being able to read a new fan-fiction. it seems that leia, Belle, and I are the only ones who even bother to keep updating and writing our stories.

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7 Re: Review Thread on Mon Nov 29, 2010 4:32 am

Well! i'm glad you all liked it. Thanks for the comments Exclamation

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8 Re: Review Thread on Mon Nov 29, 2010 4:34 am

Ha, no problem! Like I said, it's nice to have another fan-fic to review besides Leia's, Belle's and mine.

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9 Re: Review Thread on Mon Nov 29, 2010 5:14 am

Pretty good! When will more be up? yodasmile

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10 Re: Review Thread on Mon Nov 29, 2010 5:16 am

I thought that was the end actually! Tehe. Maybe it's just me, but I could have sworn that was the ending right there.

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11 Re: Review Thread on Mon Nov 29, 2010 9:08 am

i acually wanted to end the story right there. But i might expand it u never know Liea

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12 Re: Review Thread on Mon Nov 29, 2010 9:13 am

Well, the ending paragraph with Dooku DOES leave room for expansion of the story......

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13 Re: Review Thread on Mon Nov 29, 2010 9:57 am

I like to do that Grievous Very Happy

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14 Re: Review Thread on Tue Nov 30, 2010 5:15 am

Yeah, expanding stories are great to do. In fact, my story Assault of the Aggressor originally only had about 2-3 parts, but now it has five. Ha, I haven't even finished the first one....

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15 Re: Review Thread on Tue Nov 30, 2010 8:08 am

Be on the look out for "Betrayal and Innocence"

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16 Re: Review Thread on Wed Dec 01, 2010 5:31 am

Oooo! Return to Innocence is GREAT! I'll look forward to more! yodagrin

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17 Re: Review Thread on Wed Dec 01, 2010 5:35 am

Wow, return to innocence was very discriptive! I liked it!

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18 Re: Review Thread on Fri Dec 03, 2010 3:18 am

Very good Naka!!!!!!! I'll look forward to more!!! marajade

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19 Re: Review Thread on Fri Dec 03, 2010 5:25 am

In your opinion Liea, is more action needed in the story. Yoda seems to think so

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20 Re: Review Thread on Fri Dec 03, 2010 5:29 am

Storyline is more important than action. Without a good storyline, the action is pointless. I think you have a good amount of action. Your story is more about storyline than action anyway. I find it interesting.

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21 Re: Review Thread on Fri Dec 03, 2010 5:31 am

Good point Liea, it does get better though just watch Wink

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22 Re: Review Thread on Fri Dec 03, 2010 6:08 am

Ok, I finally got the chance to read more of your story, and may I say that it has gotten VERY great. Perhaps some action is needed to keep it going, but so far it's been kinda better off without action. Your story is a lot like mine-it builds up to action (with the spy probe and all), not immediately starting off with the most intense you've got. So please keep up the great work!

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23 Re: Review Thread on Fri Dec 03, 2010 6:12 am

Im glad u all like it. and i will continue to post more for "Return to Innocence" watch the Update section Very Happy

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24 Re: Review Thread on Fri Dec 03, 2010 7:39 am

loved innocence!

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25 Re: Review Thread on Sat Dec 04, 2010 4:50 am

Wow, Return to Innocense has begun to take a really interesting turn, storyline-wise. The spy keeps on following them, and now there's a bunch of dead people......interesting........ Smile Smile Smile

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