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26 Re: Review Thread on Wed Aug 11, 2010 2:33 am

You have written a story? Please post it! I'd read it. Very Happy

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27 Re: Review Thread on Wed Aug 11, 2010 2:37 am

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Okay, but I think it sucks, I have been revising it for months, and i still think it needs alot of work,

How much do I post?

28 Re: Review Thread on Wed Aug 11, 2010 2:41 am

Just open a new topic and post all of it or your first chapter.

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29 Re: Review Thread on Wed Aug 11, 2010 2:42 am

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Okay.

30 Re: Review Thread on Thu Aug 12, 2010 8:32 am

This is a picture of her death on Felucia. The video is in the movie and it's copyrighted so I can't post it. If it is a video but I actually think it was this picture not a video.

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31 Re: Review Thread on Thu Aug 12, 2010 9:24 am

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oh, well Leia you could always go with my theory if you want Barris alive.

32 Re: Review Thread on Thu Aug 12, 2010 9:45 am

I don't think I will. I've already got a plan for my first chapter, but it'll take me a while to post it because I haven't felt like writing it yet. cherry

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33 Re: Review Thread on Sun Aug 15, 2010 12:39 am

kewl.

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34 Re: Review Thread on Sun Aug 15, 2010 3:58 am

kewl.

Thanks! cherry

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35 Re: Review Thread on Sun Aug 15, 2010 4:46 am

Can't wait to read the first chapter!!

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36 Re: Review Thread on Sun Aug 15, 2010 5:26 am

Umm I actually haven't started it yet. Embarassed I know what I'm going to do, but I haven't felt like writing it yet. I think I'll finish the first chapter today and post it tomarow after church or the next day.

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37 Re: Review Thread on Sun Aug 15, 2010 7:13 am

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wath or read something about leia, you will be suprised how quickly you will want to write.

38 Re: Review Thread on Sun Aug 15, 2010 7:46 am

Okay, good advice. cherry

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39 Re: Review Thread on Sun Aug 15, 2010 9:49 am

I have almost finished the first chapter. It shows how life has been for Leia and Ahsoka on Shili. It also mentions a character I made up. A togruta girl who will be in the story. Chapter two will start their adventure. I already have an idea. cherry

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40 Re: Review Thread on Sun Aug 15, 2010 9:49 am

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Did my advice help any?

41 Re: Review Thread on Sun Aug 15, 2010 9:53 am

Yeah, I guess so. I grabbed my Episode Four Infinities comic book, read a little, then started writing! Very Happy

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42 Re: Review Thread on Sun Aug 15, 2010 9:55 am

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When I couldn't think of anything more to write I watched a clone wars video with Padme and a bitter Anakin (Senate spy) and it all came to me.

43 Re: Review Thread on Sun Aug 15, 2010 11:52 pm

Cool.

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44 Re: Review Thread on Mon Aug 16, 2010 11:58 pm

The first chapter has been delayed due to my lack of enthusiasm. Wink

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45 Re: Review Thread on Tue Aug 17, 2010 12:15 am

That happens to me. But if you just sit down and start to write sometimes the story becomes really fun and it kind of just "flows" onto the paper. Very Happy

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46 Re: Review Thread on Tue Aug 17, 2010 12:18 am

I finished it, but it just needs some touch ups. I guess I better go finish it up. It's a short chapter that just gets you familar with how life is like for Ahsoka and Leia.

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47 Re: Review Thread on Tue Aug 17, 2010 1:18 am

Yay! Read and review my first chapter! cherry

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48 Re: Review Thread on Tue Aug 17, 2010 6:21 am

AWESOME chapter!! Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy

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49 Re: Review Thread on Tue Aug 17, 2010 6:22 am

Thank you! Razz

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50 Re: Review Thread on Tue Aug 17, 2010 7:16 am

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That was great, I liked the Hero with no fear part, it sounded likke pure star wars.

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