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276 Re: Review Thread on Tue Feb 15, 2011 10:15 am

You're welcome! yodasmile


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277 Re: Review Thread on Mon Mar 07, 2011 4:41 am

Ok, I've finally gotten the chance to work more on AOTA, so chapter 10 should be finished soon, though I might not be able to post immediately considering my internet troubles......


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278 Re: Review Thread on Tue Mar 08, 2011 7:17 am

Ok, chapter 10's finally finished, though until I can use the computer I wrote it on, I won't be able to post it.


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279 Re: Review Thread on Tue Mar 08, 2011 7:54 am

Okay then!


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280 Re: Review Thread on Wed Mar 09, 2011 8:07 am

Ok, I was FINALLY able to post chapter ten in Assault of the Aggressor! Please read and review! Yes, it isn't quite as exciting as the chapters before, but I promise you, these last few chapters are preparing you for the battle this story was made for!


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281 Re: Review Thread on Wed Mar 09, 2011 10:53 am

Great chapter, Grievous!!! yodasmile


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282 Re: Review Thread on Thu Mar 10, 2011 6:33 am

Thanks!


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283 Re: Review Thread on Mon Mar 21, 2011 2:54 am

Ok, chapter 11's up in AOTA! This is where things get interesting in my opinion. And for those of you that haven't gotten what the "Aggressor" is in my story, this chapter explains it!


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284 Re: Review Thread on Tue Apr 26, 2011 12:54 am

Chapter eleven was good, Grievous!

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285 Re: Review Thread on Tue Apr 26, 2011 6:39 am

Thank you! Meesa appreciate it. Smile


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286 Re: Review Thread on Mon Aug 08, 2011 10:55 pm

Well, as you may have noticed, I restarted AOTA completely, including the prologue. The entire overall plot's been changed, so I'd really like it if you guys could review my prologue/new background and setting so I know I made the right choice. I still have the old thread up so you can compare, and I'll probably keep it up for a while for reference.


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287 Re: Review Thread on Tue Aug 09, 2011 1:23 am

That was great Grievous!!!!! Very Happy I loved it! Keep going, it's very interesting and extremely well written!!!!


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288 Re: Review Thread on Tue Aug 09, 2011 1:35 am

Thank you, you kinda inspried me to get back to it yesterday so I worked really hard at finding a good planet that would have a good military purpose instead of just some random planet like last time. Apparently that wookieepedia research paid off.Razz


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289 Re: Review Thread on Tue Aug 09, 2011 8:01 am

Haha, Wookieepedia is good for LOTS of things. XD I spend hours doing 'research' on there. XDD
Aww, I'm glad I could inspire you a bit! Wink It paid off, the story sounded great! I can't wait for more!!! Very Happy


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290 Re: Review Thread on Tue Aug 09, 2011 9:32 am

Thank you, I hope to post more soon. And yes Wookieepedia can be very helpful, my only problem with it is that since anyone can edit it, half the time you can easily be fed misinformation or false details. That's why I always do a little extra research after Wookieepedia to make sure it's correct


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291 Re: Review Thread on Wed Aug 10, 2011 12:54 am

Exactly! That's why I'm not allowed to use Wikipedia for school reports. Wookieepedia is the same way. Razz
I have several SW books that tell me about characters, buildings, planets, speeders/ships, etc. So I usually can get my info that way too. Wink


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292 Re: Review Thread on Wed Aug 10, 2011 2:56 am

Same here, not to mention, get your info that way usually gives you a little more detail than a Wookieepedia synopsis


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293 Re: Review Thread on Wed Aug 10, 2011 3:57 am

True that. Smile More often than not, I need the more detailed information. XD If I just need a quick overview of things, I use Wookieepedia.


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294 Re: Review Thread on Wed Aug 10, 2011 3:58 am

Same here, there's no point digging through a book for just a quick summary


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295 Re: Review Thread on Sun Sep 25, 2011 5:31 am

Wel, the new and improved chapter 1's up! I also edited Captain Malluck's character here and in the prologue. Buy that, I mean I completely replaced him with a tactical droid. I need Malluck's character later, and I see no decent way of getting him from here to there. So Grievous's new second in command is a TX-20. BTW, I really hope you like the new chapter 1. It's longer, but also more detailed. I may not need as much editing on chapter 2, but who knows. I really worked hard on this, so PLEASE read and review!


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296 Re: Review Thread on Sun Oct 23, 2011 9:11 am

Just a question of interest, has ANYONE read my new chapters yet? I'm not mad or anything, but it IS a little disheartening when no one reviews.


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297 Re: Review Thread on Tue Oct 25, 2011 9:34 am

Grievous, I have read them. Wink I thought I reviewed earlier........I'm so sorry if I didn't!!!!!!! I really like your writing style, my friend. Wink It's very descriptive, but the story moves along at a good pace. I never once reading it got bored or tired of the story. Keep going!!! I'm soooooo sorry I didn't review earlier!!!! From now on, I'll be sure to keep tabs on that. Wink Hehe.


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298 Re: Review Thread on Tue Oct 25, 2011 7:26 pm

Well you reviwed on the mprologue but not the new chapter 1. LOL, I get it though, it's not like I did much to promote it or anything.Thanks for commenting on my writing style, I really do try to make sure I don't get too descriptive or boring, but still let the reader feel they are actually witnessing all that's happening. Speaking of which, I'm someways through re-editing chapter 2, I don't think it needs as much of it as chapter 1 did.


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