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26 Re: Review Thread on Sun Aug 15, 2010 10:45 am

I also hope that they make more stories featuring Rahm Kota (that's another reason I made up this story)

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27 Re: Review Thread on Sun Aug 15, 2010 12:43 pm

WOW!

Fantastic story, cant wait to read the rest of it!

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28 Re: Review Thread on Sun Aug 15, 2010 11:54 pm

Yeah, Grievous is a great character, and I wish there would be more stories about him.

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29 Re: Review Thread on Sat Aug 21, 2010 10:09 pm

Whew. Just finished chapter one if you want to read it . I'll probably post the bio of Admiral Cristov Valliant tomorrow.

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30 Re: Review Thread on Sun Aug 22, 2010 12:15 am

Lots of action! Very Happy

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31 Re: Review Thread on Sun Aug 22, 2010 2:34 am

Ok. I've just posted the bio of Admiral Cristov valliant on the bio thread as well if you want to read it.

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32 Re: Review Thread on Mon Aug 23, 2010 12:27 am

I concur plenty of action!!

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33 Re: Review Thread on Mon Aug 23, 2010 2:33 am

Thanks, but you haven't seen a ANYTHING yet.

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34 Re: Review Thread on Mon Aug 23, 2010 7:10 am

Usually when someone says that it means the story is going to get really, really, exciting. Yay!

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35 Re: Review Thread on Mon Aug 23, 2010 7:13 am

You are correct. This story is just getting started! Here are a few spoilers: There is an epic battle between General Kota and Grievous. I don't want to say who wins or anything, but General Kota DOES board Grievous's ship and starts a big battle in its hangar(and yes there will be a lightsaber duel between Grievous and Kota)those are the only spoilers I'll give though.

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36 Re: Review Thread on Fri Aug 27, 2010 6:21 am

That's the basic idea I'm having for Part 1. What do ya think of it? BTW, I'm hoping to post the first section of chapter two soon as well. It's going to be a space battle, so do you want me to keep the description of the space battles about the same like the one between Cristov Valliant and Grievous or what?

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37 Re: Review Thread on Sat Aug 28, 2010 9:53 pm

Just posted the first part of chapter 2 in case you couldn't tell.

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38 Re: Review Thread on Sat Aug 28, 2010 11:02 pm

"Uh, what are we supposed to do again?" a rather brave droid asked.

Very Happy

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39 Re: Review Thread on Sun Aug 29, 2010 6:52 am

Great chapter!! I can't wait to see what happens with Kota and Grievous!!

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40 Re: Review Thread on Sun Aug 29, 2010 8:13 am

GeneralGrievous505 wrote:Here are a few spoilers: There is an epic battle between General Kota and Grievous. I don't want to say who wins or anything, but General Kota DOES board Grievous's ship and starts a big battle in its hangar(and yes there will be a lightsaber duel between Grievous and Kota)those are the only spoilers I'll give though.
i know I already posted this, but I don't know if you saw them and since your so interested to see what happens, i'll post these spoilers again for ya.

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41 Re: Review Thread on Sun Aug 29, 2010 9:20 pm

BTW, if anybody else would like to give me reviews, feel free to do so!

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42 Re: Review Thread on Mon Aug 30, 2010 12:14 pm

Excellent story! Kota has not been explored much outside TFU and he's one of my favs. Can't wait to see(or read) Grievous and Kota go head to head.  

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43 Re: Review Thread on Mon Aug 30, 2010 7:34 pm

Thanks! And yes if your a Kota fan like me, you'll be interested in the way I'm going to end this battle, and more to come.

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44 Re: Review Thread on Thu Sep 02, 2010 4:59 am

Hey, I just updated what I've written of Chapter 2 if ya want to take a quick look.

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45 Re: Review Thread on Thu Sep 02, 2010 5:02 am

Very Happy Cool! Very Happy

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46 Re: Review Thread on Thu Sep 02, 2010 5:03 am

It's only a couple extra paragraphs, but i thought I might as well give what I've written just a little more detail.

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47 Re: Review Thread on Thu Sep 02, 2010 7:05 am

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Het grievos, I like the new peice in there, it is just so real and I could actually picture the events in my mind

48 Re: Review Thread on Fri Sep 03, 2010 4:34 am

Thanks. I've been trying to be as detailed as possible so that everyone has the same pictures in their heads

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49 Re: Review Thread on Fri Sep 03, 2010 5:50 am

ok, just finished chapter 2 if you want to read it. This one really sets you up for chapter three, and trust me, I think you'll enjoy that chapter (P.S. it has a lot of action in it!)

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50 Re: Review Thread on Fri Sep 03, 2010 9:10 am

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WOW, that was amazing, you are a great writer.

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