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226 Re: Review Thread on Thu Dec 23, 2010 10:03 am

Uh oh! Dum dum dum dum! Razz


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227 Re: Review Thread on Thu Dec 23, 2010 10:04 am

Aw, the drummer's role was supposed to be mine. Razz Razz Razz


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228 Re: Review Thread on Fri Dec 24, 2010 10:28 am

A prologue? Sweet! Very Happy

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229 Re: Review Thread on Fri Dec 24, 2010 11:06 am

Yeah, I'm trying to make this seem as much like an official novel as possible. Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy


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230 Re: Review Thread on Sat Dec 25, 2010 12:47 am

Cool Idea. Infact you should just right a novel.!!! I would love it!.

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231 Re: Review Thread on Sat Dec 25, 2010 9:43 am

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well, I know some good publishers (maul passed through a phase where he wrote a book and sent it to publishers) if you need a list, majority will want the finished product and a go ahead from Lucas.

232 Re: Review Thread on Tue Dec 28, 2010 6:40 am

Yoda wrote:Cool Idea. Infact you should just right a novel.!!! I would love it!.
That's actually what this story's supposed to be. So far, what you've read has only been the first part of the larger story.

Mara-Jade781 wrote:well, I know some good publishers (maul passed through a phase where he wrote a book and sent it to publishers) if you need a list, majority will want the finished product and a go ahead from Lucas.
I'll take you up on that offer one day, thank you Mara. I'll want to finish the story first though. But, I'll come straight to you once it is.


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233 Re: Review Thread on Tue Dec 28, 2010 11:42 pm

Okedokey, I just posted the second half of chapter 6. Please give me a review, I'd like to know if it was suspenseful enough. Wink


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234 Re: Review Thread on Tue Dec 28, 2010 11:52 pm

AWESOME!

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235 Re: Review Thread on Wed Dec 29, 2010 1:50 am

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Great chapter grievous.

236 Re: Review Thread on Wed Dec 29, 2010 2:29 am

Thanks y'all! This chapter I tried to focus on suspense. Did I do all right in that category?


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237 Re: Review Thread on Wed Dec 29, 2010 2:30 am

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definetly, either that or I am very impatient.

238 Re: Review Thread on Wed Dec 29, 2010 2:32 am

I'd say a little bit of both. Razz


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239 Re: Review Thread on Wed Dec 29, 2010 2:33 am

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ha! you are probably right Razz

240 Re: Review Thread on Wed Dec 29, 2010 5:11 am

Awesome, Grievous! yodagrin


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241 Re: Review Thread on Thu Dec 30, 2010 12:25 am

Thanks, though I might revise it (and other parts) soon. IDK, I'm just wanting to perfect it for some reason.


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242 Re: Review Thread on Thu Dec 30, 2010 10:17 pm

Ok, I redid the last section of Chapter six. If you want me to post it, just let me know, but for right now I won't unless you want me to. It's nothing major, just a few sentences here and there, or minus a few bad ones.


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243 Re: Review Thread on Thu Dec 30, 2010 11:06 pm

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yeah, go ahead and post it,

244 Re: Review Thread on Fri Dec 31, 2010 1:10 am

Okedokey, the "new and improved last section of chapter six" has been posted. Please tell me if it's better or worse this time around! Smile


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245 Re: Review Thread on Fri Dec 31, 2010 2:07 am

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i think it was better, really great work greivous.

246 Re: Review Thread on Fri Dec 31, 2010 10:59 am

Thanks! I'll be posting chapter 7 soon, just for yalls info.


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247 Re: Review Thread on Fri Dec 31, 2010 9:47 pm

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great.

248 Re: Review Thread on Sun Jan 02, 2011 12:12 am

Thanks, chapter 7 is basically the end of the battle. Then chapter 8 is basically wrapping other things up, then we begin Part 2: The Bounty Hunter. Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil


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249 Re: Review Thread on Sun Jan 02, 2011 4:34 am

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which bounty hunters will be in it? supposing the title means what will be in it.

250 Re: Review Thread on Sun Jan 02, 2011 5:34 am

Actually, only one bounty hunter will be in it-Cad Bane. I just couldn't resist putting him in my story. Very Happy In fact, his part is rather vital in it too, so he's not like Bossk was in the Bobe Fett arc, with almost nothing to do except say a good line here or there. He's gonna get some action!


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