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201 Re: Review Thread on Tue Dec 14, 2010 6:40 am

Ok, thanks for the feedback! *relief floods me; starts singing "I'm singing in the Rain"* Razz

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202 Re: Review Thread on Tue Dec 14, 2010 6:44 am

Haha yodagrin I'm siiiinging in the rain! Juuust siiinging in the rain!

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203 Re: Review Thread on Fri Dec 17, 2010 1:12 am

Ok, I've updated more of chapter 5! I've finally finished the duel between Kota and Grievous-read who wins!


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204 Re: Review Thread on Fri Dec 17, 2010 6:06 am


Nice ending to a duel, Grievous! So, I guess technically Grievous won? I mean, he kicked him into the shaft.


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205 Re: Review Thread on Fri Dec 17, 2010 6:10 am

Yes, Grievous technically won, even if he didn't kill Kota. Though don't worry, Kota will get another shot at winning a duel between them later on in the story.


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206 Re: Review Thread on Fri Dec 17, 2010 6:11 am

Well then. That will deserve some yays! YAYS!! Go Kota! Don't worry Kota! It's isn't over yet! yodagrin


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207 Re: Review Thread on Fri Dec 17, 2010 6:12 am

Well the battle almost is......I'll only have one to two more chapters after chapter 5!


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208 Re: Review Thread on Sun Dec 19, 2010 12:27 am

Ok, I've finished chapter 5! I left the ending of it with a BIG cliffhangar.......


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209 Re: Review Thread on Sun Dec 19, 2010 4:44 am

What a cliffhanger! This story is very perfessional! (I know I didn't spell that right.)


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210 Re: Review Thread on Sun Dec 19, 2010 5:53 am

No, you didn't but I got what you meant to say. Thanks! Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy I'm trying to write as well as other SW authors do, so that means a lot!


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211 Re: Review Thread on Mon Dec 20, 2010 7:45 am

Would anyone else like to review? Question Question Question


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212 Re: Review Thread on Mon Dec 20, 2010 11:24 pm

Ok, I'm beginning to wrok on chapter 6 y'all! This one's shorter than the last few ones, so I guess that's my Christmas present this season. Razz Razz Razz LOL. Speaking of which, I just now realized that my story is about 35-40 pages so far with 12 font! Ha, and that's just the first five chapters!


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213 Re: Review Thread on Tue Dec 21, 2010 4:06 am

It's detailed! That's why it's so long probably. yodagrin After you're finished, you might want to print yourself a personal copy. There's some sites you can do that. I've done a little research on it. I suggest you check it out as well. I want to have a personal copy printed of Life at the Jedi Temple once we're through with book one.


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214 Re: Review Thread on Tue Dec 21, 2010 5:48 am

Thanks for the advice, though I'd already thought of it. That's why I'm keeping my story stored on Microsoft Word. Wink


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215 Re: Review Thread on Tue Dec 21, 2010 11:43 pm

Ok, I posted about half of chapter 6 today! The race against time starts now........ Suspect


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216 Re: Review Thread on Tue Dec 21, 2010 11:47 pm

Cool I like it.

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217 Re: Review Thread on Tue Dec 21, 2010 11:48 pm

Thanks! I tried to make it really tense. Did you think it was tense? Question


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218 Re: Review Thread on Tue Dec 21, 2010 11:52 pm

I Guess. I read bits and parts since your story is long and Awesome! (Because its longs I could of never done that!) keep it up. check out the final chapter of TRAPPED! in a few mins!

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219 Re: Review Thread on Tue Dec 21, 2010 11:53 pm

Ooo, I will! Usually the ending of Fan-fictions are the best, so I can't wait!


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220 Re: Review Thread on Tue Dec 21, 2010 11:54 pm

I hope you like it!

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221 Re: Review Thread on Wed Dec 22, 2010 8:08 am

Would anyone else care to review? Question Question Question


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222 Re: Review Thread on Thu Dec 23, 2010 9:37 am

Meesa would be likin some reviews soon! Muy muy! Razz


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223 Re: Review Thread on Thu Dec 23, 2010 9:50 am

BTW, I also changed the font size for both my new section and the other chapters in case you hadn't noticed.


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224 Re: Review Thread on Thu Dec 23, 2010 9:59 am

Oooo! Good, Grievous! Things are getting suspenceful! Ship about to explode, Kota trying to get off ec. Very Happy


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225 Re: Review Thread on Thu Dec 23, 2010 10:02 am

Oh, the last section of chapter 6 is suspenseful at it's peak! Let's just say, Kota, Jasten, Ullen, the commandos, and heavy wepons troopers, are all going to have to depend on miliseconds to save their lives.


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