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126 Re: Review Thread on Mon Nov 22, 2010 3:53 am

Thanks! I need to know that it wasn't confusing or anything so I don't mess up with the rest of the duel. Like I said before, I'm close to finishing chapter 4. I might even finish it this evening. Chapter 5 is where things get really intense.....

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127 Re: Review Thread on Mon Nov 22, 2010 3:55 am

AWESOME!

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128 Re: Review Thread on Mon Nov 22, 2010 7:05 am

Wow. You're good. Really good. I can't write lightsaber battles like that. I mean, not as good as that. Shocked

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129 Re: Review Thread on Mon Nov 22, 2010 9:12 am

Wow, thanks a lot! I wasn't sure if the duel was good or not, but I appreiciate the review! Like I said to Belle, I really needed one this time around!

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130 Re: Review Thread on Tue Nov 23, 2010 6:32 am

Ok, if you have'nt read/reviewd chapter 4 yet, now would be a great time to do so! I've just posted some more of it, and when I mean some more of it, I mean the entire rest of the chapter. Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy

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131 Re: Review Thread on Tue Nov 23, 2010 6:35 am

Coooooool! Smile

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132 Re: Review Thread on Tue Nov 23, 2010 6:37 am

Thanks! I actually have no idea how I'm going to be able to write both a lightsaber duel and an infantry battle at the same time. It'll probably take a while for chapter 5 to get posted.

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133 Re: Review Thread on Tue Nov 23, 2010 6:40 am

Take your time! You need to write it till you're satisfied with the way it's written. There's nothing worse feeling then posting something you're not 100% happy with.

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134 Re: Review Thread on Tue Nov 23, 2010 6:42 am

Yeah, I completely agree. But, I might post at least a section of it next weekend to keep the fans happy. Wink

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135 Re: Review Thread on Tue Nov 23, 2010 9:10 am

Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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136 Re: Review Thread on Wed Nov 24, 2010 5:55 am

Was that a review or excitement to my last post? Just making sure. If you haven't been able to tell already, I'm like C-3PO: every time I think I get the handle of human personalities, I wind up realizing that I'm not even close. Razz Razz Razz

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137 Re: Review Thread on Fri Nov 26, 2010 6:06 am

Wow amazing battle between Kota and Grievous!! Very well written!! Very Happy

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138 Re: Review Thread on Fri Nov 26, 2010 7:49 am

Thanks! I worked hard on it! It's not over BTW. There's going to be more of the duel in chapter 5.

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139 Re: Review Thread on Tue Nov 30, 2010 8:17 am

Ok, tonight, I'm going to post each chapter in separate posts, so I don't run into the "This message is too big" message again.

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140 Re: Review Thread on Sat Dec 04, 2010 5:40 am

Ok, I've just posted the first parts of chapter 5. This chapter will tend to be slightly gruesome, just for a heads up. Don't worry though, I won't make it too gruesome for my readers. I'm just wanting to use the scenes as the reminders of the costs of the Clone Wars.

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141 Re: Review Thread on Sat Dec 04, 2010 6:50 am

Wow! Chapter five of Assault of the Aggressor was great! Good job! yodagrin

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142 Re: Review Thread on Sat Dec 04, 2010 8:11 am

Thanks! This chapter is my introduction to Lightning Squad, and their personalities. In fact most of their personalities are based off of Delta Squad. Fyre is the equivalent of Fixer (the serious one), Shrin is the comedian (like Scorch), and Viles is the violent one (like Sev). I'll get into their personalities more throughout the story, and into Arc's and Holn's....well maybe not Holn for a reason I can't say without giving away a spoiler. So, with that said, I have a question-do you think I got Lightning's personalitlties well within the section I posted?

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143 Re: Review Thread on Sat Dec 04, 2010 12:12 pm

Cool, Greivous! New characters! I think you did capture their personalities good. yodagrin

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144 Re: Review Thread on Sat Dec 04, 2010 9:46 pm

Thanks! I'm really trying to get their personalities established in this section, because after the battle, I'm going to focus more on Jasten and Ullen's personalities.

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145 Re: Review Thread on Sat Dec 04, 2010 10:13 pm

speaking of such. Are those characters, Jasten and Ullen, your own? or did Lucas make them?

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146 Re: Review Thread on Sat Dec 04, 2010 10:56 pm

They are my own. I have created all of these characters in my story: Admiral Cristov Valliant, Admiral Cosin, Captain Malluck, Pilot Marel Jasten, Pilot Ruari Ullen, Pilot Homer, Trooper Telfe, Trooper Marz, Commander Ralon Arc, Captain Danson Fyre, Lieutenant Kras Shrin, Sergeant Amer Viles, and Sergeant Holn (the last five are the Lightning Squad commandos)

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147 Re: Review Thread on Sun Dec 05, 2010 12:06 am

Ok, if you haven't read and reviewed chapter 5 in Assault of the Aggressor, now would be a good time to do so because I just posted another section of it. In it, Jasten experiences a great tragedy..... Sad

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148 Re: Review Thread on Sun Dec 05, 2010 3:29 am

Awwwwwww. Poor guy!!! Pretty good, BTW!!! yodagrin

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149 Re: Review Thread on Sun Dec 05, 2010 3:30 am

Yeah, I realized, that for a future scene to work out better, I would have to kill Homer off right then. Sad

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150 Re: Review Thread on Sun Dec 05, 2010 6:29 am

Wow!Great job Grievous!

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