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101 Re: Review Thread on Wed Nov 10, 2010 6:20 am

Wonderful! Next chapter ought to be pretty exciting! Very Happy

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102 Re: Review Thread on Wed Nov 10, 2010 6:37 am

Yeah, the rest of the chapter has a lot of action.

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103 Re: Review Thread on Wed Nov 10, 2010 9:12 am

GeneralGrievous505 wrote:Well, since I obviously have several fans, I'd like to ask some questions to help me proceed with the story:
1. What has been your favorite part of the first three chapters so far?
2. Who is your favorite character?
3. Have I given you enough description to keep an image in your mind, but not one that's confusing?
4. Is there anything that I could use improvement on?
5. (this one's just for fun) What do you predict will happen during the rest of the Battle of Corellia?
Here's the questions again since they are now several post back.

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104 Re: Review Thread on Sat Nov 13, 2010 12:16 am

Please read and review the new section of chapter 4 I just posted! This section sets up for a big lightsaber duel between Kota and Grievous.

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105 Re: Review Thread on Sat Nov 13, 2010 3:45 am

We're going to have a duel! Oooo!!! Razz

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106 Re: Review Thread on Sat Nov 13, 2010 4:01 am

Yeah, and a infantry battle at the same time.

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107 Re: Review Thread on Sun Nov 14, 2010 10:44 am

Kewl!!!!!Interesting set up!!!!Gonna b great!!!!!!Lovin it!!!!!

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108 Re: Review Thread on Mon Nov 15, 2010 1:56 am

Thanks a bunch!!!! Yeah, the if you think you've seen action so far, this next part is going to blow you away!!!!!

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109 Re: Review Thread on Mon Nov 15, 2010 2:21 am

Yep!!!

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110 Re: Review Thread on Tue Nov 16, 2010 9:00 am

Wow amazing story!!! I can't wait to read about the duel!! That should be epic!!! Great story!! Very Happy

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111 Re: Review Thread on Wed Nov 17, 2010 5:55 am

Thanks! And yes, I plan to make the duel as epic as I can. Smile Smile Smile

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112 Re: Review Thread on Sat Nov 20, 2010 9:16 am

Okay, just to let you fans know, I've been adding extra sentences/paragraphs here and there around chapter 4 for some extra detail. So if you want to reread it to get a better image of the story in your head, go ahead.

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113 Re: Review Thread on Sat Nov 20, 2010 10:53 pm

I LOVEDDD IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Oh how i wish kota was in tcw!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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114 Re: Review Thread on Sun Nov 21, 2010 6:29 am

Thanks! Yeah, I knew a few Kota fans would like this one since it's Kota at his peak.

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115 Re: Review Thread on Sun Nov 21, 2010 6:32 am

i ely wanna see him in tcw!

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116 Re: Review Thread on Sun Nov 21, 2010 6:37 am

Yeah, same here. That's actually why i orginally wrote this story, but then I figured that TCW would mess it all up if I sent it to them, so I'm just going to be happy getting it published as a novel if I can.

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117 Re: Review Thread on Sun Nov 21, 2010 6:39 am

same with me

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118 Re: Review Thread on Sun Nov 21, 2010 6:45 am

Do you mean you agree with the idea for my story's future or are you saying you have the same idea for your story?

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119 Re: Review Thread on Sun Nov 21, 2010 6:51 am

both

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120 Re: Review Thread on Sun Nov 21, 2010 6:58 am

Ah, I see. Just making sure.

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121 Re: Review Thread on Sun Nov 21, 2010 7:04 am

wens ch5?

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122 Re: Review Thread on Sun Nov 21, 2010 7:07 am

Actually, I'm not even done with chapter 4 yet. I haven't been posting entire chapters at a time you see. I'm close to finishing chapter 4 though. Just 3 more sections I think.

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123 Re: Review Thread on Sun Nov 21, 2010 7:12 am

ok

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124 Re: Review Thread on Mon Nov 22, 2010 3:31 am

Okay, I just posted more of chapter four and of the lightsaber duel you've been waiting for! I'm not done with either, but am coming close!

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125 Re: Review Thread on Mon Nov 22, 2010 3:50 am

GREAT JOB!!!!!!!I kno whatcha mean bout the lightsaber fights, VERY hard to write.But urs was great!Keep up the good work general!

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