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26 Re: Review Thread on Sat Nov 06, 2010 3:48 am

Thanks!Which did u like better ch2 or ch3?I like both the same

And if you think this is good YOU OUTTA READ THE BATTLE SCENES IN CH4 AND THE BIGGEST MOST INTENSE DUEL WHICH WILL GIVE A WHOLE NEW MEANING TO SIBLING RIVALRY!!!!!CANT WAIT TO POST IT!!!!!!!!

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27 Re: Review Thread on Sat Nov 06, 2010 3:53 am

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CH.2

Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil

28 Re: Review Thread on Sat Nov 06, 2010 3:54 am

I did too.CH4 AND CH5 WILL BLOW YOUR MINDS!!!!!!!!

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29 Re: Review Thread on Sat Nov 06, 2010 3:56 am

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sweet.

Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil

30 Re: Review Thread on Sat Nov 06, 2010 3:58 am

Those two cahpters are mainly action.It really tells how good of a jedi and how good of a fighter belle is

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31 Re: Review Thread on Sat Nov 06, 2010 6:43 am

I love your new chapter Belle. I cant wait for chapter four and five! flower

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32 Re: Review Thread on Sat Nov 06, 2010 10:17 am

thanks!

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33 Re: Review Thread on Sat Nov 06, 2010 11:45 am

Posting ch4 tommorro!

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34 Re: Review Thread on Sat Nov 06, 2010 9:48 pm

NOw i don't know that much about star wars, beside the 6 movies, but i actually got the whole thing, compared to my sisters thing

affraid drunken Sleep Evil or Very Mad

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35 Re: Review Thread on Sat Nov 06, 2010 9:51 pm

Thanks.I hexitated to post ch2 ch3 ch4 ch5 ch6 ch7 and ch8 after ur sisters story but im glad i did. They turned out better than i thought

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36 Re: Review Thread on Sat Nov 06, 2010 9:52 pm

AGREED

affraid drunken Sleep Evil or Very Mad

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37 Re: Review Thread on Sat Nov 06, 2010 9:54 pm

thanks! What a Face albino pig flower

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38 Re: Review Thread on Sun Nov 07, 2010 3:51 am

Chapter five tomorro!

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39 Re: Review Thread on Sun Nov 07, 2010 4:27 am

Seems as tho nobody else wants to read this

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40 Re: Review Thread on Sun Nov 07, 2010 5:18 am

Who do you think will win?Graciana or Belle?Post what you think along with your comment!

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41 Re: Review Thread on Sun Nov 07, 2010 8:02 am

Awesome!! Poor Padme and Anakin!

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42 Re: Review Thread on Sun Nov 07, 2010 8:04 am

Thanks!!!!!!

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43 Re: Review Thread on Sun Nov 07, 2010 8:11 am

Question:
An ultamite showdown.Blood versus blood.Sister versus sister.Darkness versus light.Who do you think will win?Belle or Graciana?

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44 Re: Review Thread on Sun Nov 07, 2010 8:11 am

My money's on Belle.

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45 Re: Review Thread on Sun Nov 07, 2010 8:13 am

Another Question:
What was ur fave part in the chapter?Is belle a good Jedi?Is belle a good fighter?What are somethings you like about her?Which bounty hunter of the fatal five would you like to be?

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46 Re: Review Thread on Sun Nov 07, 2010 8:38 pm

Dum Dah Dah Dum!!!!!!Chapter 5 today!!!!!!And thank you to all my fans!!!!It really helps this writers confidence in her book when you comment!!!!!!

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47 Re: Review Thread on Mon Nov 08, 2010 3:11 am

Very Happy

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48 Re: Review Thread on Mon Nov 08, 2010 5:08 am

OK chapter five may not get posted today but if it dont it will b 2morro!!!!

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49 Re: Review Thread on Mon Nov 08, 2010 6:35 am

Cool action Belle! Belle was described quite well. However, to help you out, I think you should have described the Fatal Five a bit more. If I hadn't seen the Dramatis Personae beforehand, I would have been completely lost. I'm not wanting to be critical or anything, because this is actually a really good story, but I'm just wanting to help you out as a fellow writer of SW novels. Wink

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50 Re: Review Thread on Mon Nov 08, 2010 6:37 am

I kno.I did in the orginal chapter4 but i have to shorten them on this so i can post them.But thanks!

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